Anonymous asked:

Would you say the first Kangoku Senkan has the worst writing out of all Lilith games you’re familiar with? If not, which one do you feel has the worst writing?

It doesn't have the worst writing in terms of whether the story makes sense. Kurenai had logical, even geographical inconsistencies. TY2 used mind control to squeeze months' worth of training progress into one day, and still tried to have the typical NTR clichés, like Yukikaze remarking about how small Tatsurou's penis must be in spite of never having seen it. TA0 involved characters (primarily Asagi) making decisions that seemed to have no logic behind them at all.

But I would say it has the worst writing in the sense that the protagonist is weak, the heroines are unlikeable, and there's so little story that an entire day can pass without anything happening whatsoever. The basic training format isn't structured that badly, but it's horribly repetitive, and in need of something else to spice it up. Later Kangoku Senkan games use the exact same format and a similar premise, but manage to do it a lot better.